Hmm, OK will give it a go.
At this stage I'm not talking about the truth or otherwise of the points, just the question of why those points were chosen.
The biggest thing missing for me is an underlying sense of coherency - why, for example, is Point 3 so important? Point 8 seems very important - why is it last and not up with Point 1 which introduces the concept of Jesus in the first place?
Who are these points speaking to? I can think of three groups: Non-Christians, Traditional Christians and Progressive Christians.
Non-Christians are going to struggle, I think. I'm interpreting Point 3 as a technical statement about the Eucharist (I could be wrong), but how would a non-Christian know that?
I also have a feeling that the elephant in the room is the Bible, which isn't mentioned. What do Progressive Christians think about the Bible? (Many varied things, I assume) Is there a consensus? After all, the Bible is going to be the primary source of information about Jesus, no matter what you think about its accuracy etc.